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Description

I took pictures a few weeks ago during sunset, but I muted the colors in this picture because I loved the twinkles at the bottom of it. I wanted to emphasize the overall skyscape rather than just the typical neon pinks.

(C) A.greenlaw 2015
Image size
4000x2666px 9.81 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T3i
Shutter Speed
4/1 second
Aperture
F/22.0
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 16, 2015, 8:14:03 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
Sensor Size
22mm
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

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<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/>Whats the first thing you notice? The shadows of the trees up against the sunset

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/>What do you like the most? The colors are amazing

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletyellow:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="566" title="Bullet; Yellow"/>The least? The way the photo is almost "leaning" to the left. I would rotate it just a bit to straighten it out more. I think the way the trees on the left got cut off and you see the whole one on the right is kind of throwing it off as well.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>:What could make it better? Like I said, straighten it out a bit, maybe play with cropping it, just so it's a bit more visually pleasing.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/>Whats the first thing you thought when you saw this? Wow, that is absolutely beautiful

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpurple:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="212" title="Bullet; Purple"/>Vision? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpink:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="568" title="Bullet; Pink"/>Orginality <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/>Technique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/>Impact <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>
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